You're an absolutely brilliant writer! I really cannot wait to read more of your story, I love the plot line and I just adore how you word everything.
December 24th, 2013 at 10:37am
In just getting through the first chapter, let me begin by saying that I love how you described what he went through the night he lost his ability to walk. Favorite line in the chapter: "Roman, bring me my noble steed."
The plot seems super interesting and I can't wait to see how you develop everything as the story goes. Keep up the good work!