The Quiet Ones - Comments

  • hearts;

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    I just found this story and OH MY GOD I AM SO IN LOVE
    Daniel and Leyla are so cute and uncertain with each other a lot of the time and I think that's just so realistic and lovable about this story.
    and this sorta kinda makes me think of an adorable guy in my grade because he's an attractive giant teddy bear like daniel and he makes me feel all fluttery and fuzzy inside but I'm scared to talk to him
    January 24th, 2014 at 07:50pm
  • yopo501

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    Ahhhh I can't wait to see what's next, how everything will go! :)
    January 23rd, 2014 at 01:54am
  • laughingirlauren

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    Goodness!
    I'm loving this story so much!
    I'm so giddy about it.
    Please keep writing, you're amazing at it.
    January 22nd, 2014 at 08:39pm
  • hell-okitty03

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    Aaaaaah!!! They kissed so excited about this..plz update!!
    January 18th, 2014 at 04:11pm
  • bob morley

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    UGH so damn good
    January 15th, 2014 at 06:25am
  • yopo501

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    My favorite story on mibba EVER
    January 13th, 2014 at 09:54pm
  • daely

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    Ughh! I'm loving these two chapter updates! Part of me wants to ignore them so I can read a bunch of chapters at once but I know that's not going to happen...addicted.
    January 11th, 2014 at 02:55am
  • Live.Love.Laugh.

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    Love it!!
    January 11th, 2014 at 02:28am
  • Live.Love.Laugh.

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    He is drawing her isn't he!! Cool
    January 10th, 2014 at 09:00pm
  • bob morley

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    This is great! Its THE FIRST original fiction I've been able to find and enjoy since maybe 2011. Its addictive, I love it!
    January 10th, 2014 at 07:08pm
  • hell-okitty03

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    Ahh!! Keep updating lol ,best story<3.
    January 10th, 2014 at 02:00pm
  • hell-okitty03

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    Hehehe! This is so cute ,I really like Daniel he is so adorable ahh! Plz update soon!
    January 9th, 2014 at 01:55pm
  • perfectxxangelx

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    OMG please put the next chapter up ASAP!!!! Please please please! I'm addicted!
    January 8th, 2014 at 09:48am
  • yopo501

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    Awwwwwwwwwwwwww haha. Thanks for the update! Mr. Green
    January 8th, 2014 at 07:37am
  • i'm miss nothing x

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    I love this. Everything flows together really beautifully and it seems like you have a really good attention to detail without having to go rambling on about details. You're able to set a scene and make it feel like you're there. So far i'm enjoying all the characters and can't wait to read more!
    January 4th, 2014 at 08:25pm
  • hell-okitty03

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    I want to read much more of this story, is not like any other story in here is really unique and I love it .I really want to see them talk to each other is so cute. Plz update soon.
    December 30th, 2013 at 05:29pm
  • IceDeath.

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    This strange relationship between the two just makes me smile for some reason. I can't wait 'till they actually speak with one another, 'if' they do that is. Update soon!! :) I'm wanting more yet again.
    December 30th, 2013 at 07:24am
  • yopo501

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    Haha I'm lovin this story so much! I've never read anything like it and I could totally identify with the characters. Keep up the good world and hopefully you'll update soon! :) Mr. Green
    December 30th, 2013 at 12:15am
  • IceDeath.

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    I find myself wanting more. :) Update soon!
    December 29th, 2013 at 08:34am