Perfect Picture - Comments

@ Airi.
Thank you for the lovely comment and correction! I appreciate it! :3

Hey there~ I'm here as a judge for the Magazine's Winter Wonders contest.

Your story was so cute~ I like cute things. OvO I love the way that you described the relationship between Kay and Spencer, it was very sweet. They seem like a very fun couple lol. owo I also really liked the undertone of comedy that you had in the story, the part about the oven made me smile.

I think my favorite part of the story was the Ferris Wheel part when Kay was trying to comfort Spencer. It was just such an awe-worthy moment and it was so cute the way you wrote it. Your descriptions are great, they really give the reader a good picture and they help with connecting your characters, who are very relatable and realistic at that.

Your story was very good overall, I really enjoyed reading it. It was something nice to read. Very well done on it.

There was one error that I did notice in the story though, but it's just a small one and I'm being nitpicky. OwO In the sentence wearing the red coat that, Kay had gotten him for his 21st birthday, the comma after red coat that isn't needed.

@ kim wonshik.
He he I just put it up as a sequel. :D

You have to let me know what happened to that oven.
And of course, you're welcome!

@ kim wonshik.
Aw this was the sweetest most wonderful comment ever! Thank you! And I'm glad you liked it! :D You've actually inspire me to write a few more shorts about their relationship and how Spencer killed the oven. :D

Nicely done! I think you set the scene nicely and really allow the reader to see how exhausted Kay is. I just get that feeling that makes me think he's so tired that he doesn't even care anymore, especially about the traffic when he says it's just a "lucky night." The way you describe Spencer's science experiment is funny and it's definitely made me curious as to what exactly he did in there. It's cute how thoughtful Spencer is towards Kay! The simple gesture of buying scented candles is so adorable and makes me think that he's thinking of Kay and how to make him relax when he gets home. Then for him to whip out those tickets was even more so! The relationship you describe is so heartwarming and charming that it makes me want to squeal and hug them tightly and just gush over them. Ending it on such a perfect note was just... well, perfect! It gives you that sort of fulfilled feeling like you know their lives are going to be so love-filled and just amazing from now on! Great job on this!