I was disappointed to see how similar the 2 hookups were... I mean couldn't you have been a little more original? Don't let my comment get you down though, I still loved it!!!
I really like this story. It's usually not the kind of thing I'm into but this story is well done with a good plot. I think it would be interesting to throw in some more drama with Matt. I like how he doesn't hit Abby and it seems like he may be better suited. He also isn't her legal father so I'm not sure how that whole Brian and Abby thing will work out legally (especially since she's only 16). Please don't take my comment as criticism, just had some hopefully helpful ideas. Please keep writing this story!!