Hearts of Deception - Comments

OH MY GOD! JASON IS A JERK! How can he call Avalar selfish? Can't he see that he's the one being selfish right now??

Ugh! I hate Jason. And poor Avalar. But yeah, I have to say, their relationship is moving too fast. But... Jason, she gives you a baby! Stop being such a jerk, alright!

Woah! A baby on the way! And Jason, move on already. Don't do that to Avalar and yourself.

@ Vicious Vengeance

I'm glad you're enjoying the story.

I actually feel sorry for Serena. I have a bit of a habit that usually drives boys away too. (Apparently I'm too loud and they're kinda intimidated by me. So whatever). However, Jason's words are actually kinda harsh. It's good that there's Don to make things better.

Is Avalar gonna ask Jason to move in with her? But Jason just wants to play around right? Meanwhile Avalar is looking for a lifetime partner. I wonder where this will end up.

I love playing the Sims and I'm kinda excited to read this story. ^_^ My only suggestion, maybe you can put the Sims character in the Characters section so the readers can see how the characters look like. Other than that, I think this story is good. ^_^