So I found this story while creeping around the group-written forum and this is just stunning. I love the plot and how you all so effortlessly weave in all the characters. Each character has their distinct voice and it comes through so well! Sometimes it seemed over saturated with facts that aren't needed, but these facts do help to create the picture in my head, but sometimes it can feel like a bit too much? But other than that I can't find anything to critique. This is absolutely amazing and I cannot wait to read more!
But other than that I can't find anything to critique. This is absolutely amazing and I cannot wait to read more!