January 23rd, 2014 at 10:12am
@ Miss_Nightmare_
Hahaha thanks so much!! Great feedback!! I really appreciate it :)
Seeing as you left such an awesome comment I'll start working on the next chapter!
Helping Hand - Comments
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January 23rd, 2014 at 08:16am
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Ah this is so perfect!!! <3
I just love how shy Kellin and Oli act around each other. And when Kellin looked at Oli shirtless? AHHHH
Please update!! The story is amazing and I need more !!! ;)January 23rd, 2014 at 06:56am -
@ Kahlan13
Aww and your lovely comment had made my day!! Happy New Year to you too!! ^_^
I'm really grateful for the feedback, I wanted Oli to have a really troubled past to give him more depth, and good I'm glad they aren't too long!!December 31st, 2013 at 02:23pm -
What a Great chapter!
I feel so Bad for oli... The poor Guy had to suffer so much... His Story is sad :(
But I am really happy that kellin seems to accept him more and more... He Even comforted oli and complemented olis tattoos ;)
It is amazing that your Chapters are pretty Long... I like that :)
So thanks for the Update, it made my Day!
Happy New Year!
December 31st, 2013 at 02:07pm -
@ bara-kitten
I like the second chapter more as well ^_^ thanks so much for the great feedback!!December 31st, 2013 at 12:02pm -
I think I like this chapter more than the first one. Kellin's coming to his senses and realizing he doesn't have to be an asshole to Oli, and Oli's opening up a little bit. I think it's cute that Oli just wants Kellin to like him, it's just adorable. I like shy Oli way more than outgoing Oli.December 30th, 2013 at 11:41pm
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@ maria_3cam
Thank you very much! I'll have it posted soon :)December 29th, 2013 at 09:58am -
Very interesting and well written :) can't wait for the next chapter!December 29th, 2013 at 06:55am
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@ Kahlan13
Wow thank you so much!! I really appreciate the feedback ^_^
Yeah, Merry Christmas to you too!!!
I'll have the next chapter up soon :)December 23rd, 2013 at 08:37pm -
Hey :) I really like this Story so far! Sounds very interesting... Poor Oli!
Your style of writing is great, easy to read.
Cant wait for the next chapter!
Merry Christmas by the Way!
December 23rd, 2013 at 09:17am -
@ bara-kitten
Aww great I'm so glad ^_^
Okay thanks for letting me know, I can go sort it out :)
Thanks for commenting!December 23rd, 2013 at 08:20am -
Ahh yay another Koli. I love these things.
This seems pretty interesting, and making Kellin seem like a spoiled brat makes it even better. I can't wait to read more.
One thing I noticed was the excess exclamation points. Every once in a while it's okay, but there's so many in this chapter. x.x
I still really like this though. Keep it up. c:December 23rd, 2013 at 01:35am
YAY I AM SO EXCITED
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YOU HAVE MADE MY DAY / WEEK YOU HAVE NO IDEA :D