@ Miss_Nightmare_ Hahaha thanks so much!! Great feedback!! I really appreciate it :) Seeing as you left such an awesome comment I'll start working on the next chapter!
Ah this is so perfect!!! <3 I just love how shy Kellin and Oli act around each other. And when Kellin looked at Oli shirtless? AHHHH Please update!! The story is amazing and I need more !!! ;)
@ Kahlan13 Aww and your lovely comment had made my day!! Happy New Year to you too!! ^_^ I'm really grateful for the feedback, I wanted Oli to have a really troubled past to give him more depth, and good I'm glad they aren't too long!!
What a Great chapter! I feel so Bad for oli... The poor Guy had to suffer so much... His Story is sad :( But I am really happy that kellin seems to accept him more and more... He Even comforted oli and complemented olis tattoos ;) It is amazing that your Chapters are pretty Long... I like that :) So thanks for the Update, it made my Day! Happy New Year!
I think I like this chapter more than the first one. Kellin's coming to his senses and realizing he doesn't have to be an asshole to Oli, and Oli's opening up a little bit. I think it's cute that Oli just wants Kellin to like him, it's just adorable. I like shy Oli way more than outgoing Oli.
Hey :) I really like this Story so far! Sounds very interesting... Poor Oli! Your style of writing is great, easy to read. Cant wait for the next chapter! Merry Christmas by the Way!
Ahh yay another Koli. I love these things. This seems pretty interesting, and making Kellin seem like a spoiled brat makes it even better. I can't wait to read more. One thing I noticed was the excess exclamation points. Every once in a while it's okay, but there's so many in this chapter. x.x I still really like this though. Keep it up. c:
YAY I AM SO EXCITED
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