OH MY GOD.. you have no idea, my heart actually HURTS! your writing is amazing and I thought I was prepared for the agonizing breakup but i guess not I'm like so emotionally invested in this it feels like I just broke up with my boyfriend in real life, that is how I feel right now; and let me tell you, it sucks! But I guess that's the point right?? well done.
Oh. I mean, I was preparing for something heartbreaking like that. But not that. You're such a great writer to be able to pull the kind of emotion from readers; pure sadness, and utter heartbreak (by just reading).
Nooooo what the fuck! This chapter tears me apart omg... I felt like crying all along the scene (and it doesn't happen often!). The description of the feelings...I could feel it when I read it. I feel like I was pained as much as Kellin and Vic. But they are both in the wrong. DO SOMETHING BECAUSE I CAN'T HANDLE IT!
this chapter has reminded me of the most horrible break up iv ever went through and my emotions are all over the place now! BUT, as depressing and heartbreaking this chapter is, youve written it exactly on key. and that what makes it so impressive because the story is so real, this stuff happens in real life and people can relate to it and thats why this story is so amazing! i know exactly what kellin is feeling and i know this is going to break him into a million pieces and i dread to think whats going to happen to him in the next chapter... and i know everyone is probably hating vic so much right now (including myself) but the thing is i bet hes feeling just as heartbroken as kellin... anywayyyyy, sorry for the long comment, just thought you should know that your writing is amazing and i cant get enough :) i love this story a little too much and im sad that its ending soon :( (btw your updates have been great lately, keep them coming :D)
oh my gosh its been 4 months ive missed you hey hi hello im gonna catch up on this story right now and ill comment again letting you know what i think IVE MISSED THIS FIC SO MUCH