hey :) this is an amaze story :D heheee maybe you could use spell check? :) i think you should have talon and rivermist fall in love then something really dramatic could happen :D like all the fire elves come looking for rivermist and they have to run away etc :D hehee well done :) *subscribes* heheee =]
its my fave so far!! yes with the romance!! but then through in drama and make talon go to war or somtin and him get hurt and then rivermist nurse him back to health!! oh ad spell check!!