Oranges - Comments

The ending just killed me.

STILL WAITING FOR THE SEQUEL WHERE THEY SPEAK TO EACH OTHER AND KISS AGAIN AND FALL IN LOVE FOREVER

@ thisshitgetzold
Oh my god. I didn't really think about this having a sequel because it wasn't really set up for one. But oh my god please do! I hate that poor Jacko's all alone at the end :(

@ thisshitgetzold
Dude, I would love a sequel. The end made me sad, aw! They KISSED. IT WAS A FIRST KISS. YOU CANNOT JUST HAVE THEM NEVER SPEAK AGAIN.

I like your writing style quite a lot so I'd love another piece anyways.

@ brxndneweyes @ xMareBear14x @ lisozeme @ Wave789 @ blanklove I'm sooooo glad you all liked it! Didn't really expected this kind of response. Thank you so much, I appreciate it. Now, about the sequel, there wasn't supposed to be one. But if people keep requesting, I'm totally up to do it. Thanks again, ya'll cuties. <3

Oh my god, this is so fucking cute.

I have died from the cuteness that is this one shot.

But in all seriousness, this is absolutely adorable and very well written. I really like Jack being all shy, because a shy Jack is a cute Jack. And the fact Alex is all layed back and he's just trying to make Jack talk more, it's sweet.

Especially when they kissed. Now that was cute and sweet. Yes indeed. I do hope you write a sequel because I'd like to see (well...read) more of shy Jack and Alex with his oranges.

And Merry Christmas!! ^.^

Asgkpxpwlxls you should do a sequel where they actually get together and stuff because this was the cutest thing and it makes me sad that they didn't keep talking

I would die for a lil sequel oneshot thing oh my god. This was so cute.

This is so cute oh my gosh! The end made me sad though :(((

I love this so so so much! It's adorable, and I love Jack with braces in stories, and Alex was just a sweetheart. Makes me really sad they didn't talk after it though. :(