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  • shayla1462

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    @ umngrrl
    Stay with it ... I think you'll see how the story progresses and why things happened the way they did here
    Thank you for the comment
    January 19th, 2015 at 11:20pm
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    I found this because of the sequel and wanted to read it first, I am so excited to start the sequel, but am so sad from the end of this story.
    January 19th, 2015 at 09:39pm
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    This is I hate... Out of no where they kill a main chacater off .. Then have the other one fall in love in the sequal. If you didn't want the two original couples to be together than don't pair them together. I understand it's story but I've read so many stories were they do this and it makes me want to stop reading thier stories because they change the plot out of no where... I understand I'm seeming like a bitch but almost every story I read on mibba now is they kill of a main chacater and have the other one fall in love with someone new with in a year of the death or less. If you want the sequal couple to be together than you should have them together in the first place and do a back story on lost love one.. Not have people fall in love with the chacater than kill them off. You can lose a lot of subcribers and reads for things like that I am willing to give the sequal a chance but once I fall in love with one chacater I stick with them until the end... Sorry for the rant I just hate stories with main chacater deaths.. I'm such a sapp doe happy endings.. Sorry for being a bitch :/
    September 28th, 2014 at 10:57am
  • rizzoabby

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    I started reading the sequel before I knew there was a story about Cat so that helped soften the blow a bit with this one. Soo sad but overall a really great story!
    June 19th, 2014 at 04:09am
  • shayla1462

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    May 2nd, 2014 at 08:36pm
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    @ canadice
    New one is up .... I will always love you
    April 6th, 2014 at 04:21am
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    I'm scared that if I read the sequel I'm going to start crying... I know it's sounds crazy but when I read Fanfiction I get SO emotionally attached to the characters.... But then again shes such a great writer IDK WHAT TO DO!! any advice fellow chasing cat readers?
    April 6th, 2014 at 04:09am
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    @ polishpearlsparis
    I know me tooo!!! I actually started to tear up.... I'm just pretending the last two chapter didn't happen
    April 6th, 2014 at 04:02am
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    While I don't love the ending, I really would like to read the sequel, so hopefully it's up soon?
    April 5th, 2014 at 10:07pm
  • HereinParadise

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    i took the time to read the chapter again and im just not a fan of it. at all. I got WAY too attached to Cat's character and you just killed her. I couldn't wait to see her future. I'm not happy about the fact that he may have to fall in love again and still have Cat's daughter.
    April 4th, 2014 at 01:32pm
  • madch2os

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    Um what? That's the only thing I can say. I hope I get to read more of your writing, but maybe not with major character deaths.
    April 4th, 2014 at 09:00am
  • Megan J

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    I feel like after everything Cat has been through, she didn't deserve to die that way. She deserved a happy ending. But, you killed her :((((
    April 4th, 2014 at 05:18am
  • HereinParadise

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    NO NO NO NO NO DONT END IT LIKE THIS
    April 4th, 2014 at 03:27am
  • ILoveNiallHoran

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    Wtf?! Seriously?!
    Why did you end it like this?! No!!!
    You can't kill her! seriously..... I loved this story but the ending was crap!
    I want the sequel to be their life as married and they having their own babies...
    Not Sidney falling for another girl...
    April 3rd, 2014 at 10:13pm
  • cellardoor0789

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    I have to be honest here. I really dislike how this ended. Please don't misunderstand, I think you are an incredibly talented writer. You convey your story beautifully. That being said, I feel like this ending came from out of nowhere. It almost felt like you realized that you had set the two main characters up in such a volatile relationship that it was going to take entirely too much time and effort to give them any sort of stability. The abrupt death of one was much easier. And I think we both know that killing off Sidney would cause a riot. :)

    I'm sorry for the long comment here, I just didn't want to flame a great writer without explaining my position.
    April 3rd, 2014 at 11:33am
  • Yellow111

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    Wtf?????
    April 3rd, 2014 at 09:46am
  • polishpearlsparis

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    I want to unread the last chapter and go back to 10 minutes ago where I was blissfully unaware of this tragedy.
    April 3rd, 2014 at 04:21am
  • Nikki1231

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    This makes me so mad! I'm not a fan of the ending!
    April 3rd, 2014 at 04:20am
  • polishpearlsparis

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    Omfg I have never been so upset at a fanfiction in my life. Legit cried Sad
    I completely agree. Why? Why couldn't they just stay happy? Now my biggest problem is do I read the sequel where we know that Sid's going to fall in love with the sports psychologist or leave it alone and read this one without the last chapter or completely forget I ever read this?
    April 3rd, 2014 at 04:19am
  • bailey08

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    what.
    April 3rd, 2014 at 04:14am