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  • Corrupt_Perfection

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    That isn't the end. It isn't a tragedy. I hold on to hope and love.
    March 19th, 2014 at 07:30am
  • chihirosenn

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    Why are all the fics I love ending terribly.
    March 19th, 2014 at 03:54am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    That is a very saddening chapter. I hope they can find their way back to each other.
    March 19th, 2014 at 03:23am
  • pierceyourface

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    VIC NO WHAT ;-; you play with my feels
    March 19th, 2014 at 01:49am
  • PierceTheTori

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    it's not over right? Their's more?
    March 19th, 2014 at 01:27am
  • PierceTheTori

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    nooo what oh my
    March 19th, 2014 at 01:14am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    That was really sad, it made my heart hurt. I know Vic is going to win this for Kellin and that stupid Rhaefiel will finally be gone! (Sorry, I don't think I spelled his name right.)
    March 18th, 2014 at 04:46am
  • chihirosenn

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    If you kill Vic...
    March 18th, 2014 at 04:08am
  • Bringmethe_kellic_

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    Oh my gawd , if Raphael wins I'm going to be crying ;-;
    March 18th, 2014 at 03:30am
  • Kellicxo

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    That killed me
    March 18th, 2014 at 03:08am
  • jessfwentes

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    omg my feels
    March 18th, 2014 at 02:43am
  • PierceTheTori

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    crying i am crying
    March 18th, 2014 at 02:35am
  • crown-the-kellic

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    nOOO ;-;
    March 17th, 2014 at 07:30am
  • Kellicxo

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    Omg no the feels
    March 17th, 2014 at 03:25am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    The amount of hatred I have for Raphael can't be compared to anything. I want to punch him in his god damn freaking face. The drama is so intense, I love it!
    March 17th, 2014 at 03:10am
  • Bringmethe_kellic_

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    Omg NOOO :0
    March 17th, 2014 at 02:06am
  • jessfwentes

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    Omfg. nO Sad
    March 17th, 2014 at 01:33am
  • chihirosenn

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    No.
    March 17th, 2014 at 01:15am
  • A-DiDDy101

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    This has become my absolute new favorite story. The idea is freaking fabulous and amazing, although the names can be confusing but whatever. I'm so excited for more and you are a brilliant author. There's always a new idea and the story line never gets boring.
    March 16th, 2014 at 06:58am
  • kellic

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    Hey, I'm loving this story still! I think you're doing a really great job, but I do have one suggestion.

    At parts of the story, it just gets kinda confusing for me, and I struggle to find out who is speaking. For instance, ""Really Kellin?" I giggled."

    Vic was the one to say "Really Kellin?" But since you put the "I giggled." After, it made me think that Kellin was the one to say it. I suppose this is okay at times when it's easier to understand, but it does throw me off sometimes. I just suggest putting something such as "Vic said as I giggled." Or something of that sort.

    Anyways, I really do love the story! I missed coming home to your updates. (:
    March 16th, 2014 at 04:19am
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