I really enjoyed this chapter. It totally had me gripped! Mind you, I've been gripped from the start. I'm glad Josh is back behind bars but I don't think we've seen the last of him. I hope Ali can be happy together with Zack. They deserve to be together and happy. Please update soon xx
I really love this chapter and story as a whole!! You write it really well and I'm very excited to see what happens between Ali and zacky!! Budding romance?!
Thanks you guys! She's getting better, thankfully. I *should* have the next chapter up tomorrow night/Monday morning. Your feedback helps me tremendously. Thank you again (:
First off, I'm sorry your daughter has been ill. I hope she's better now.
This chapter wasn't that short, nor was it "shitty". I enjoyed it and it was full of tension and drama. I can't wait for the next instalment! Please update soon xx
@ AJ9 Thank you! I'm hoping that she'll let me update at least once a week or so!
@ NeverWakeMeUp Thank you!! I did a co-write about 4 years ago that isn't even up anymore lol that's the extent of my Mibba writing. I've always been pretty good with essays and papers though so I'm hoping that helps me with this story!
@ xxGee I'm hoping that it won't be too long before I have an update out! Fingers crossed (:
Love this so far! Have you ever written at all before? I can tell you have either written before or you really put a lot of thought into this! I love the whole storyline and I can't wait to see where this goes! Can't wait for another update!
I'm loving this story, and it DEFINITELY doesn't suck. In fact, it's quite addictive. You're a very good writer and I'm looking forward to reading more of this. I hope your daughter allows you to update again soon xx