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  • Queen of the Clouds

    Queen of the Clouds (4955)

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    Thanks so much! OMGYES
    December 29th, 2013 at 06:27am
  • typhlophile

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    Probably one of the shortest one-shots I've come across, but also one of the best written. I'm amazed and extremely impressed with how well detailed it is. I think that the shortness of it actually adds more effect to the story itself, emphasizing the focus solely on the kiss.

    Kudos.
    December 29th, 2013 at 04:19am
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