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  • the_girl

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    @ khuckles
    thank you so so much! I was actually always concerned that I couldn't capture the emotions as well as I wanted to, so hearing you say that really means a lot to me :)
    March 30th, 2014 at 01:26am
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    I really hope you update soon! I love this story, it feels so authentic to me. I've been waiting for them to reunite! I know it won't be peachy.. can you imagine seeing each other after all of that? But you'll know what to write. You're doing a great job capturing emotions and moments, using just enough description. If they don't meet up, or if its prolonged, I won't mind for its to the credibility of the story... but I just want to know what happens soooooon! :0)
    March 28th, 2014 at 03:01am
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    @ Lyra
    Thank you dear, it means a lot, as always! It literally broke my heart too when I wrote it. And I really wanted everyone to FEEL THE HEARTBREAK...as cruel as that sounds. I hope I achieved that. SIGH the upcoming chapters are gonna be so emotionally draining lol
    March 26th, 2014 at 09:44pm
  • Lyra

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    This broke my heart actually. I mean, I'm happy that they finally saw each other, but they're both so hurt and broken that the reunion was more bitter than sweet. I like how you made it realistic. I can't wait for the next chapter hun x
    March 26th, 2014 at 09:30pm
  • Harley91594

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    Eeeeeee. They finally saw each other! I hope they can maybe push their insecurities aside and talk :-)
    March 26th, 2014 at 07:57pm
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    @ nailsntacks
    I know :) hehe
    March 23rd, 2014 at 01:56pm
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    Oh don't leave us hanging like that. You're killing me!
    March 23rd, 2014 at 01:14pm
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    @ Harley91594
    We'll see...
    March 23rd, 2014 at 03:51am
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    Ahhhhh! You're right, that cliffhanger has made me excited for the next chapter. I wish Finn had gone to the signing but I understand why she decided not too. Maybe they're gonna fall in love all over again over a cup of coffee?
    March 23rd, 2014 at 02:31am
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    @ Lyra
    haha it is and they do...and it would be perfect. Maybe TOO perfect.
    March 23rd, 2014 at 12:07am
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    @ the_girl
    ...it's because it's awesome lol. And if anyone deserves it, they do!
    March 22nd, 2014 at 11:56pm
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    @ Lyra
    Thank you love :) Well yeah she didn't go but they still ran into each other...sooo...
    I love how many people want them to have make up sex lol (including myself)
    March 22nd, 2014 at 10:38pm
  • Lyra

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    I knew you were going to end this chapter on a cliffhanger. I knew it. *sighs*
    Great chapter as per usual my dear. I can understand why Finn didn't go to the signing but, I think she should have gone. The two of them obviously need closure. And to make up. With lots of make up sex.

    I'm really looking forward to the next update!
    March 22nd, 2014 at 10:26pm
  • Harley91594

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    Oh my goshhhh I hope Finn goes to the signing and sees Gee. Maybe that would be good for both of them.
    March 19th, 2014 at 08:31pm
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    @ Frozen December Moon
    Thank you!
    And I don't think she's mean, she's just desperate and hurt because she knows Gerard still has feelings for Finn. But yeah, WE'LL SEE.
    March 19th, 2014 at 06:41pm
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    I love this new chapter, I would love it if they would meet. But if Gerard left Jen it would be good because she seems like a mean person.
    March 19th, 2014 at 06:32pm
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    @ Lyra
    Maybe...maybe not.

    Thank you :) And we can make a deal: Grace gets rid of Frank and in return Gerard gets rid of Jen! LOL

    No but in all seriousness, I can kinda understand Jen even though she's being a manipulative cow. But she's aware of how strongly Gerard still feels about Finn and she's scared of losing him. :/
    March 19th, 2014 at 05:52pm
  • Lyra

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    Oh, please tell me they're gonna meet soon?

    I loved this chapter. I love how realistic Finn's feelings are. Also, I hate Jen. She's a total cow. Gerard needs to get rid of her. ASAP.
    March 19th, 2014 at 05:47pm
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    @ Frozen December Moon
    I keep rewriting the next chapter(s) and the ending. Who knows whats gonna happen
    March 18th, 2014 at 07:49am
  • Frozen December Moon

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    OMG can't wait for the next chapter, the end is so near I can taste it LOL.
    March 17th, 2014 at 08:11pm