But You Said You Loved Me - Comments

I figured I could get through these faster if I did comments instead of blogs. So here's a live comment as I read haha.

I love the banner and layout, first off. I love the inner narration and SHE LOVES HER TEACHER? Scandalous lol! Aww I love that her brother came home! Ok the new teacher is sorta a douche. I hate teachers that give snide remarks. Ah Heath is an asshole! For flashbacks, make sure you put them in italics. The beginning of chapter 5 was sorta confusing to me until I caught on. I love how protective Jake is. I hope she breaks up with him!!

@ RyanHurst
Oh hun it's no problem. I'm already in love with this story c:

@ DeadMansTouch
Awww, thanks so much! I'm so glad you like it! This comment means a lot :)

I'm not even very far into the first chapter (not past the first paragraph, baha) but I felt the need to stop and write this.

You. are. amazing. Why am I now just finding this story? Other than my secret obsession for student teacher stories, you have a brilliant way of wording things. I'm already drawn in!

Amazing job already cx

Very intriguing prologue.
I read the original BYSYLM and I absolutely loved it.
I'm excited to see what's in store for the rewrite.
:)
<3

I really like the prologue, looking forward to more :D