I figured I could get through these faster if I did comments instead of blogs. So here's a live comment as I read haha.
I love the banner and layout, first off. I love the inner narration and SHE LOVES HER TEACHER? Scandalous lol! Aww I love that her brother came home! Ok the new teacher is sorta a douche. I hate teachers that give snide remarks. Ah Heath is an asshole! For flashbacks, make sure you put them in italics. The beginning of chapter 5 was sorta confusing to me until I caught on. I love how protective Jake is. I hope she breaks up with him!!
I'm not even very far into the first chapter (not past the first paragraph, baha) but I felt the need to stop and write this.
You. are. amazing. Why am I now just finding this story? Other than my secret obsession for student teacher stories, you have a brilliant way of wording things. I'm already drawn in!
I love the banner and layout, first off. I love the inner narration and SHE LOVES HER TEACHER? Scandalous lol! Aww I love that her brother came home! Ok the new teacher is sorta a douche. I hate teachers that give snide remarks. Ah Heath is an asshole! For flashbacks, make sure you put them in italics. The beginning of chapter 5 was sorta confusing to me until I caught on. I love how protective Jake is. I hope she breaks up with him!!