GODDAMMIT TRENT! STOP THE BULL SHIT! YOU DON'T FUCKING DESERVE TO TAKE BEN AWAY FROM ALEX, YOU WEREN'T EVEN THERE FOR THE PREGNANCY! SO YOU CAN STFU AND FUCK YOURSELF, TRENT!
The plot line seems different, which is a good thing, just watch out for phrasing and cliches. Also, be aware of your work; you said the ex-boyfriend's name was Trent and towards the end you changed it to Tristan. It's best that you proof read before you submit. Good luck on your story.