Honestly, I don't normally read original fiction, but the title of yours caught my attention and I had to give it a read
I really enjoyed this piece. It's so poignant in the beginning, but by the end it's uplifting and made me smile. I can defintely relate to your character and everything she feels as a result of her appearance, but I feel like even a person who has never experianced a weight problem would find it relatable, just because of the way you wrote it.
I must admit, I would love to see more about this character. I enjoyed it as a short story, but I think it could also be made into a really wonderful and meaingful chaptered story if you chose to do that. I will definitely go check out the poem that inspired this, too.
I really enjoyed this piece. It's so poignant in the beginning, but by the end it's uplifting and made me smile. I can defintely relate to your character and everything she feels as a result of her appearance, but I feel like even a person who has never experianced a weight problem would find it relatable, just because of the way you wrote it.
I must admit, I would love to see more about this character. I enjoyed it as a short story, but I think it could also be made into a really wonderful and meaingful chaptered story if you chose to do that. I will definitely go check out the poem that inspired this, too.