The sentences just flew in my head, it was like gliding in the sky on a windless day. Basically, there are no bumpy bits, usually when I read a story on here I have to stop and really think about it, but reading this felt really smooth. The dialog is very cute, very well thought through, quite detective like. I've never actually seen Sherlock Holmes, but now I feel like I'm missing out on a great fandom!
I loved the analogy you used in the first part of your comment. Thank you so much! You should definitely watch it, it's brilliant(: