Ahhh Daryl you idiot! Ahhhhhh! This was a simple but amazing chapter and I'm in awe of where you could go from here! So much is going on and it's so exciting. Keep up the good work!
I really liked this chapter! Can't wait to see what happens next when she gets back to the prison, I'm kind of missing Zack and want to see his reaction to Jaycee being abandoned and now shot xxx update soon
Oh holy crap, when you said it was different you weren't kidding. I quite enjoyed and felt sorrow for the first time in a while for Daryl. It broke my heart to read all the pain he was going through and you've done this quite well. I can't wait to see what happens from here!!
i only just started reading a couple days ago and i'm already up to chapter 40! absolutely love your writing and i'm so worried that i'm gonna burn through the rest of the chapters and have withdrawals haha! love your story, you write so beautifully :)
Shit, that's going to be one hell of a trip by foot with her foot messed up like it is. This chapter was short like you said it would be but it was perfectly done because of it. I really liked the turmoil (as messed up as that is to say) you put the character to because it was written rather well. Can't wait for more!
Oh shit, OH SHIT! I can't believe him right now, seriously, what a fucking dickhead! Not to mention, no one came looking for her during all the confusion and the fact that she is now knocked out. Damn, I can't believe I've been reading this story for so long and it's at 100 parts. I'm super excited to see this to the end! Can't wait for more!
You have come so far with this story that it's insane, I'm just in complete awe of this story. I really wish that Daryl would stop his bullshit, it wasn't her fault that the baby died. I'm so excited for the next chapter and what you have planned!
Jesus Christ, Daryl's being a big jerk about this! I mean I get it that he is traumatized as well but gahhhh, pisses me off! Deserves a nice punch to the noggin or something. I really hope things clear up soon or she gives him a taste of his own medicine! Can't wait for more!
Oh come on! It was just ok and then out of fucking no where it is gone in an instant. I'm so upset right now, I don't even know if I can cry tears or not! Grrrrrr! I do commend you for writing these last three chapters, it's something I have always loved about your writing. I can't wait for more! :3
I feel really bad that I haven't read this story in so long. I mean, come on, I absolutely loved it to pieces! And today after reading everything all over again, and reading all the new chapters I haven't gotten to, I am proud to say my love for it as grown once more in one sitting. Maybe even a bit stronger than before. That's just how captivating this story is!
And you know, I'm going to need you to update soon as you can because the wave of all the Jaycee and Daryl feels just had to come crashing down love. Great way for me to worry about baby Dixon and everything else in that nature. But poor Zack though :/ I can only hope everything turns out right!
I was happy because you had updated...but now I'm sad. It was an awful way for Zack to finally find out that she was pregnant and on top of that she might lose the baby! You cannot make that happen, you hear me? I will not allow that.