How about a Nine? Other than "malice Slytherin" needing to be "malicious Slytherin" in one of the later chapters, this is flawless! I really love the voice your writing gives, and how it feels like I'm watching a movie. Can't wait to have more.
Well Draco u better find a way to easily break up with Becca without breaking her heart u should make her break urs instead i don't know, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
I loved this chapter, even though it resulted in Dani getting absolutely pissed off and hurt. The awkwardness between the two is adorable, I just can't even. You have no idea how excited I was when I found out that you updated, my feels are out of this world like I just want to jump into your story and just take their wands and throw them in a room together.
I hope him taking care of that hurt will result in some smut. ;) cause you know, it should happen. kthanks.
If I was Dani I would be horrible to Becca by tellin her tht Draco is only using her becuz he is pissed tht Blaise asked Dani on a date during the Hogsmeade trip.....tht would bruise her self esteem and her confidence, can't wait to read more update as soon as u can :)
Draco is so caring why can't he just tell her how he feels? And she is so oblivious to the fact that he likes her back that she won't admit it herself. Ahhhh!!!!
GOOD LORD, woman. You are truly trying to kill me. I'm not going to hate you because best friends don't hate but seriously doe, Draco needs to get off the jealous train and DO something. Fuck Blaise. And fuck Draco for the time being until he does something cute and sweet for Dani.
Rebecca Summer has been moved to my dislike list. Mainly because she did the deed with Mr. Malfoy and we all wish we could with him. I feel for Danielle though, she clearly had some sort of feelings for the bloke and now he's gone on and ruined it although what is up with her agreeing to go to Hosgmeade with someone other than Draco? Tisk
I love this chapter I hope you update soon Draco is so sweet while Harry is being an ass I hope her and Draco get together soon and that his family loves her since his family has a huge impact on his decisions :)
Ugggghhhhhhh. Can Draco and Danielle just kiss and have babies already? Like can we make this happen, pronto? You have no idea how good this feels to read this chapter after this move. It was like the perfect treat for all the hard work.
I feel like Draco is literally like this. I mean granted he's a little rude and arrogant but come on, he's too cute for words. But, in all seriousness. I love this chemistry you have between them, it makes me jealous of Danielle and I want to hate her but I can't. I like how sweet and slow it's going, obviously they have feelings but it's nothing so BAM, it's nice and sweet. LOVE IT.
Harry's an ass, stupid stupid stupid. Ginny is no match to Dani.
Harry and Ginny can suck it.
P.S. I'm serious about those babies. Lessmakeithappenkthanks.