Girl Next Door - Comments

<3 this plz update soon

Y'know, I really like how you paint a picture with your words. I loved the first half of the first chapter, the way you descriptive words made it very easy to picture Matt waking and getting ready for the day. And let me tell you, it was a very nice mental image

Aww, it's sad that Cami lost her grandmother and that's how she came to live next to Matt. It would be hard to live in a place that was once home to a lost loved one. You'd be happy and grateful, but also have a bit of guilt that they're not around anymore.

Haha, loved the last line of the first chapter. Very amusing. I suppose he could be considered the incredible hulk... incredible meaning amazing, rather than huge

"Your friends are getting kind of creepy." Matt looked over his shoulder and rolled his eyes at the two men that were watching like patients in a psych ward.

Bahahaha! That literally made me laugh out loud. Creepy boys.

It's sad the way her daughters calls brings Cami back to such a terrible night. I hope the hit her ex took to the head did more than just knock him out. Son of a bitch.

Naww, Jimmy is so good with Kayla. It's very cute

And Draco sounds adorable. He reminds me of my big boofy dog, who would probably do the same thing. Haha.

I'm looking forward to seeing where this story goes. Seems like Matt and his friends are going to be a great addition to Cami and Kayla's life

Love it! Brian and JImmy are such goofballs, but I love them XD Awww, doggy is adorable! Can't wait to see how the story progresses! :D

So far this is a great story. I can't wait to see where this ends up going :D

Excited to see where this goes. :)

I love this story so much!!! They're adorable :3

Another cute chapter. Brian and Jimmy are so ridiculous, they crack me up. Poor Camille and Kayla, going through that abuse. Thank you for updating! Please update soon. And I'm sorry to hear you're having a hard time with your other stories :( I'd help if I could!

How did I not know about this?! Girl, you never cease to amaze me :) Yet another story for me to gush over. Please, please, please update soon! <333

LOVED! Can't wait for more! (:

I imagine sleepy Matt scratching his stomach to be super attractive
I really like your style of writing, it's very nicely done!

I cant wait to see where this goes! It looks super promising

aawe this sounds really interesting so far- can't wait to see what'll happen next

and yeah the lower tummy scratching- nice mental image that

Haha, he scratched his tummy...

I can't for more from this though you said it'd be slow. And I'm also lookong forward to hear about her story. Her past about the man.