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  • simple.heart

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    @ joeyschick367
    I thought it would be good to get some Hannah into the story, especially since I have more plans for her later on.
    July 23rd, 2014 at 12:24am
  • madamUnco87

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    Well how awkward having to have lunch with Hannah!!!

    Ha. Love the name she keeps Harry under in her phone. Sounds like she better answer him soon. I'm team Liam though, they seem better suited.

    Thanks for taking the time to update, looking forward to the next chapter.
    July 20th, 2014 at 12:49am
  • joeyschick367

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    It did seem a little fillerish, but it was good to show Hannah's side of things, and that Niko is actually feeling guilty. Makes me want her to end up with Liam even more though! Aha loved it as usual xxx
    July 19th, 2014 at 06:41am
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    @ madamUnco87
    Lol "only for a laugh"...bastard. Zayn's message was probably my favorite part of the chapter. More good Zayn texts to come of course. New chapter is being worked on right now, so hopefully it'll be out today or tomorrow. Thank ya darlin!
    July 14th, 2014 at 10:15pm
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    @ joeyschick367
    I think you're gonna like Niall in this story, but yeah Harry deserved that. Thank you darling! Hope you're doing good! New chapter should be out sometime tonight-ish.
    July 14th, 2014 at 10:13pm
  • madamUnco87

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    Omg!!! How embarrassing, trust Niall to do something like that.

    Love the message from Zayn, especially the kisses at the end :)

    I wonder what will happen between Harry and Niko.

    Sounds like they had a fun night ;)

    Awesome chapter, looking forward to the next one. Thanks for taking the time to update :) :) :)
    July 13th, 2014 at 07:52am
  • joeyschick367

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    :O .......... OMG I'm dying! Haha, bloody Niall! Serves Harry right though, for being an asshole. Just saying. This chapter though, ugh, you and your amazing writing are killing me! I honestly never comment on stories, I just can't help it with you! Can't wait for the next one xxxx
    July 13th, 2014 at 05:53am
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    @ joeyschick367
    I'm Harry girl too, but Liam is just too good in this story. And plus, I randomly get these intense, unavoidable Liam feels so this story has been a good place to put all of them.

    But thank you darlin, I'm so happy you enjoy it because I love writing this story! <3
    July 10th, 2014 at 09:52pm
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    @ madamUnco87
    Haha, I try! I'm glad you like this!

    And yes, Harry was wrong for canceling like that. (It's okay, I get into stories like that too!)

    Hugs darlin! Thank you for reading! You all seriously make updating so much fun!
    July 10th, 2014 at 09:46pm
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    @ paperweight
    Next update is being worked on as I type this! I'm super excited about it too! Thank you darlin!
    July 10th, 2014 at 09:41pm
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    @ halcyondays
    Niko and Liam are amazing together aren't they?
    July 10th, 2014 at 09:41pm
  • joeyschick367

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    Also, I agree with @madamUnco87, although I tend to be a Harry girl, I'm really hoping Liam pulls through! I can't even tell you enough how amazingly written this story is. Mr. Green
    July 10th, 2014 at 04:34pm
  • joeyschick367

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    This is. OMG, I can't even. You are way too good with words! Also, not one, but TWO, chapters. I officially love you. Xx
    July 10th, 2014 at 04:22pm
  • madamUnco87

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    A double chapter and sexy time with Liam!!!!!!! You. Are. Awesome!!!!!!!! :D :D :D

    I can't believe Harry, what a douche! >_> (I tend to get caught up in fan fiction, it's not real life I know...but it's so more exciting than mine. So don't mind my rants from time to time, has nothing to do with your writing or the way you're doing it....I just rant!)

    Seriously I loooooooove the way you write!!!!!!

    Awesome chapters, and thanks for taking the time to update! :)
    July 10th, 2014 at 03:24pm
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    I completely agree with everything Mariluisa De Jesus said! Please continue to update as I am in love with this story. I can't wait for the next update as always!
    July 10th, 2014 at 08:01am
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    Ahhh I'm so nervous for what will happen but I hope Niko & Liam end up together :(
    July 10th, 2014 at 06:57am
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    @ Mariluisa De Jesus
    Firstly, thank you so much! I read this comment and honestly, I didn't know what to think other than reaching through the screen and hugging you. Thank ya so much for commenting and I'm so glad you like it! I swear I'm really trying with this story.

    Secondly, Zayn is a hard person to pen, but I like the Zayn that I've written because he's a good friend.

    And, David Bowie is amazing. The man...ugh, I'm kind of in love with him...on a spiritual level.

    Thank you for taking the time to comment! I love to read these!
    July 10th, 2014 at 06:22am
  • Mariluisa De Jesus

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    P. P. S. David Bowie is just another bonus.
    July 10th, 2014 at 05:11am
  • Mariluisa De Jesus

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    By far the most tastefully written, well-developed, fascinatingly addicting story I've read and trust me, I'm a Mibba-junkie. Please, please, please continue updating!

    P.S. I NEVER comment on stories. I'm so just hooked on this one I had to let you know so that hopefully you stay motivated. Also, great job on writing Zayn. I feel like his character always get botched but you make him so genuine and authentic to read. Such love. Mr. Green
    July 10th, 2014 at 05:11am
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    @ madamUnco87
    Exactly! I thought he'd be perfect for that kind of friend, because honestly, I was trying hard to figure out which of the boys would be the one to have this conversation with her. Zayn just seemed to fit.

    Aw, it's nothing sweetie, thank you for taking your time out and reading! :D
    July 9th, 2014 at 11:13pm