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It's official I'm writing a BDSM fic.....

@ alltimelcw
I'M LAUGHING SO HARD THANK YOU

OKAY SO I RED THIS AGAIN AND THE BDSM PART WAS GOOD AND THE MAKEUP BUBBLEBATH WAS SUPER FUCKING CUTE BUT I STILL CRINGED NO U ARE AMAZING THO I PROMISE

@ trottablogga
It's not so much the BDSM side, because that is bearable, but the whole idea of someone being in pain (when they don't want to be) when they are doing something that is supposedly pleasuring, and then them having to stop, like the guilt that the other person would have, would be insane, and it would be a memory in their sex lives forever, like that seems really cringe worthy for me, i don't know, but thats me personally, you are a fantastic writer and i applaud you for writing something like this that i believe is somewhat out of your comfort zone. I sort of skimmed over this because i was making weird noises and kind of backing away from my computer, but thats not because of your writing, like i said, you are an amazing writer, but yeah because i didn't really read it well, i missed the BDSM bits, but i will have to re-read it soon. Like i don't want it to sound like i don't like you/your writing bc you are fucking amazing and super cute but like this kind of plot makes me squirm (in a bad way) like the other one of these i read, "Meringue" that made me cringe as well! but thats just me, like i said.

@ alltimelcw
Haha, I feel you! I hate BDSM fics but I liked the idea of changing it up to where, hey, the other is in pain! Cause you're right, it does happen and idk. Plus, I've been wanting to write this for a while and then someone requested it.

i don't mean this in a bitchy or insulting way in any form, but, oh my these kind of fics are so cringe worthy for me, like oh man, i know it happens in real life and stuff, but it still makes me cringe, yours still did, but thats basically just the plot, it was really well written though! and I'm glad they had a safe word! Great fic, well done :)