The Exception - Comments

I'm wondering what kind of role Sean Parker will be playing later on in the story. I feel like something big will happen between him and Holly and then Ryder will intervene and let his bad boy show....a lot. Sounds like it could be interesting...if that is what you were thinking :) As for Holly, I think she held up pretty well on the red carpet with Ryder. I'm torn though. I really like Ryder's character but part of me can't decide if I'll keep liking him. He has the potential to become a real jerk to Holly and I don't want that to happen. He's got to open her heart to him and open his heart to her. Just my personal opinion. I did like meeting Maggie though and I hope she and Holly will have a great friendship. I can't wait to see what happens next...the after party shall we say. lol!

Keep it up, sis! Doing great!

So I'm sensing the impending drama here...I can't help but to think that Mr. Sean Parker is going to muck everything up once these two finally start to fall for each other. Also, I'm sensing a dangerous chemistry connection between Holly and Ryder. I can't wait to see where this goes! :)

Hehehe! I love to see their feisty sides. I can't help but laugh at their bantering. I wonder if Holly will be able to hold her ground or if she will cave to his smoldering looks. I can definitely tell that he will push her to the limits, but it works that she knows so much about him. That's when being an obsessive fan helps you a bunch. LOL! However, I have a question (and I may be getting ahead of myself) what is Ryder's weakness? Everyone has one. Holly's is her insecurity and lust for making it in Hollywood. But what is his? You have me intrigued and I want to know more, more, more! And I'm not demanding at all ;)

Great chapter, sis! Keep it coming :)

Are they the same age?
I'm curious where you are going to take this story. Ryder already seems like a handful but hopefully holly can make a breakthrough. And hopefully Ryder doesn't do something embarrassing and makes Holly like hate her life. Also interesting in learning what happened before she moved to Hollywood..

Update soon please.

OOoh, this looks really interesting! I think it's off to a great start and I cannot wait to read what happens next! (:

Thank you for telling me about this! So far this story is off to a great start and I can't wait to read more.

Thank you for telling me about this! I am so intrigued to find out what happens. I am hooked! Can't wait for more! :)

I'm so glad you told me about this! I'm looking forward to it already!! :) I can already tell that the drama is going be amazing! Hopefully the romance will be just as amazing as I suspect it will be!

Can't wait for more!! ♡♡

:) This is already super amazing! Can't wait for more!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hehehehe!! I am sooo going to love reading this story. You can just tell that sparks are going to fly because of their clashing personalities...and maybe some actual heat later on. I think Holly can take him on. I'm curious to find out her past because that will definitely influence how she handles Ryder. I predict that he will fall hard for her and have to convince her to love him back by the end of the story.

I can't wait to read more! And you inspire me to want to write some myself :)