A Wild Winter's Day - Comments

@ madamUnco87
Harry is very sweet towards her. I love it :) And I agree, if only all men were that nice about it hahaha

Oh boy. I'm about to post the next part. Let's see how much you like me then ;)

Maybe this friends thing could work out after all, seems to be a lot of flirting going on...which is GREAT to read!

I love the last little bit, he was so sweet towards her....well in the end! Wouldn't it be nice if all men were that sympathetic haha.

I'm sorta starting to like you again, but your not out of the wood just yet :p looking forward to the next one.

Ta ta, love! :)

@ madamUnco87
LOL Awww thank you! I'm glad you think so :)

No, YOU stay awesome. Thank you very much for being you :)

Friends?!?!?!?! Nooooooooooooooooo :(

It's hard to stay mad at you, since you still write them so well. But I'm still not happy....-_- lol

Can't wait for the next chapter, stay awesome!!! :)

Friends?!?!?!?! Nooooooooooooooooo :(

It's hard to stay mad at you, since you still write them so well. But I'm still not happy....-_- lol

Can't wait for the next chapter, stay awesome!!! :)

@ b4ll3rb4n4
Oh wow, thank you so much! That's very sweet to say and I absolutely adore you for sending this comment. I hope you continue to enjoy :)

Thank you for reading!

Awesome, thank you!! This story is lovely. I am getting more and more obsessed with each update!

@ madamUnco87
Oh no! I'm sorry! And someone pointed out that the chapter gets cut off. Grrr. I fixed it in case you missed it :)

I hope you start liking me soon!

@ b4ll3rb4n4
Ahh, thank you so much for pointing that out! It cuts off a pretty important part too! It has been fixed. Here it is if you don't want to go searching for it :)

“Harry.. I think you should leave,” she said, calmly. She made way to the door and went to open it before a loud crash sounded out, followed by a curse.

“Argh, fuck!”

She went to inspect what happened and gasped in surprise, hand covering her mouth. Harry had used his full strength and kicked a hole through her wall, pieces of crumbled drywall and sheetrock scattered on the floor. Harry was spewing out cuss words, pain etched on his face as he bent at the waist. His weight was leaning entirely on the perfectly smooth wall, his hand clutching his shoe.

“Harry..”

He lifted up his head sharply and scowled, a mix of pain and anger flashing in his eyes. “Sod off!”

“Did you hurt yourself?” She took another cautious step toward him and when he didn’t protest, she reached to help him take off his boot and carefully peeled his sock off. “Oh god..” His toe was already swelling to two sizes bigger than the norm, the skin bruising. “It looks broken,” she confirmed.

Harry went to rest his heavy head on the wall, letting her check him out, and winced when it banged harshly against it. “I’m drunk..” He whimpered, watching her inspect his other toes, her soft feather like touch causing his chest to constrict. His breathing came out in harsh pants, his desire building and building for her.

“You think?” She clicked her tongue, disapprovingly shaking her head. “You kicked a fucking hole in my wall and broke your toe, Harry.”

Was she for real? Was she seriously giving him a hard time after she broke him? It was her own fault.

“Fuck this,” he pushed himself off from the wall and unskillfully limped towards the door, too angry to allow her to see how painful it was to walk.

“Where are you going?!” She cried, irritation laced in her voice.

“Away from your bullshit,” he said over his shoulder as he slammed the door shut behind him.

Anna gathered his boot and sock he had left behind and stormed towards the door, flinging it open to witness Harry lean on Dave as they slowly made way to the lift. She whipped his belongings at him, missing him by a mere inch as it plopped to the ground.

“Call me when you’re fucking sober,” she called out furiously before slamming the door and leaning her back against it, still feeling the aftershocks of what had just happened.

She sighed deeply, exhaustion weighing her down as she slid down the door and onto the floor, hands covering her face as she cried.

Oooooooh, I don't want to read anymore :( :( but you know I will haha :)

They need to sort this shit out....please dear god I hope they do.

Post again whenever you can, I'm not happy with you for splitting them up. BUT I know you'll come good in the end (hopefully lol) and then I'll like you again....lol

I don't know if it's just me or not, but my chapter cut off here :/

'“Harry.. I think you should leave,” she said, calmly. She made way to the door and went to op'

@ BrookieCookie490
I completely agree! Don't you just want to shake her? Thank you for reading and commenting :)

Ugh she is being sooooooooo dumb. She needs to wake up and realize this. I hope she comes to her senses and they get back together soon. I love them together and hate them apart.

Thank you! You're so sweet :)

"I have a feeling things are just going to go from bad to worse." *evil laugh*

Oh gosh, what an emotional chapter =l

I have a feeling things are just going to go from bad to worse, no I have not been on Tumblr...haha! Too boring for me at the moment, so just haven't been on.

Keep up the good work =]

@ madamUnco87
This chapter was fun to write! It's no secret how much I love Finn. You will see more of him in the next chapter (if you haven't caved and read it on Tumblr hehe)

I love Finn he is awesome!!! And him and Harry together is just hilarious :)

That was a bit of a bombshell that Finn dropped on her, I wonder how she'll react.

This was a funny chapter, I mean expecr towards the end...haha!

@ madamUnco87
Thank you, love! :D

Couldn't resist the Nurse Peaches bit ;)

Harry wins over even the coldest of hearts with his charm, am I right?

Her family are a hoot!!!! Total crack up....and yeah, I think Harry will win Luke over, eventually. lol

Nurse peaches, now that was just was classic :)

This was such a cute chapter!!!!

@ madamUnco87
Hahahaha! I love that you caved and read the other chapters! And aw you're so incredibly sweet :)

If you think that tiff at the beach is awkward, just wait until you read the next chapter (#19) that I'm currently working on ;)

I giggled too when I wrote Harry's reaction hahaha