A Turn of Events - Comments

@ Loomaloo
I've been trying to get back to it but college has been killing me with end of semester projects and now finals, but come the end of this month I'll be back and writing on a more consistent schedule, so don't give up on the story! Thank you so much for your comment :)

Hey I just found this one today and couldn't stop reading! I really hope you'll update soon, I really like where this is going :)

I've read chapter 5 and I love it! I love how long each chapters are and the amout of detail poured into them. I wish the spacing was a bit better (after a person speaks there is a new paragraph) and the text was larger because I had to zoom in on my computar to read it.
Other than that, I really enjoy this story and I am totally reccomending and suscribing to this!

I'm only on chapter 4 but I love this story so far! It's amazing and I've never read anything like it. I can't really see humans taking over the vampire race because vampires seem way more powerful and stronger. But I like how humans are in control, I just don't see humans staying on top forever.
In chapter 4 I notied this: I sat on one of the bar stools by the island and began to eat the food, it tasted as good as it smelled. My surprised eyes shot up to his and a hint of a grin stretched over his lips, “I was a cook in my human life, I prepared the finest meals for kings a queens,” he said, speaking of a time very long ago.
I think you meant kings and queens?
Other than that I'm back to reading this and please keep writing this story because I love it so far!

@ Nightmaire
Working on the next chapter right now, thank you :)

This is a really good story. Please update soon.

I love your writing, you use so many great descriptions. I also love the idea for this story, I think you could go great places with it!