Piss on Me - Comments

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Wow, this was great!

@ brxndneweyes
Whyy

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@ brxndneweyes
Yes.. for me, I like a guy with either flippy hair of long(shoulder length) hair I like a guy with tattoos, and a guy who could rough me up (ronnie Radke )

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@ brxndneweyes
He does omg he was really cute when he was younger

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@ brxndneweyes
Yess Ikr. I have a video with a Justin Bieber look a like I THOUGHT IT WAS HIM WHEN HE WAS YOUNGER OMGG

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@ brxndneweyes
Oh I don't watch hairy Men. Just look up; Twinks
I watch emo twinks on: Homoemo.com they're HOT
Omg I watched a video with hairy Men and it scared me. (I've seen way worse while eating pizza

@ BringMeTheFuentes
According to Wikipedia: "A forced orgasm is a form of orgasm control where the active partner sexually stimulates a submissive partner to the point of the submissive's involuntary orgasm, with the submissive attempting to restrain the onset of orgasm."

@ brxndneweyes
I should do that now!
And I think...i actually forgot what the meaning is, but you could check if the meaning is on Urban dictonary (I spelt that wrong)
And what I do to get insperations for smut is I watch (because I'm actually gay) gay porn, and it helps

@ BringMeTheFuentes
I think the only thing I wouldn't read is the daddy!kink, haha. Is a forced orgasm the same as a ruined orgasm? I'm unsure of the term.

@ brxndneweyes
Thank you! Like I'm writing this group of oneshots where it has: Rape Play (not really rape), BDSM,“Daddy", Forced Orgasms,Denied Orgasms, etc. So ya. I'm going to try and write a Spanking one.
but thank you for the edvise :-)
See my problem is I'm a terriable speller and my tablet doesn't help because; it doesn't spell check.

@ BringMeTheFuentes
Read lots and lots and lots of fics with spanking! Get the hang of it.

My advice is, though you may take on the same basic structure of how it happens from what you read, make it different. People like new and exciting. Smut where it's all rushed and no details, and it tells you all about the actions but nothing about the feelings and the sensations, isn't good IMHO.

@ brxndneweyes
Ya, drinking pee is kind of where I draw the line.
And I will be sure to check it out. Also I write Kinks, but I'm terriable with writing about Spanking it's harder than it looks

@ BringMeTheFuentes
I love writing about it in all forms!

Thank-you very much! There's going to be a sequel involving Grieco/Flyzik and fisting, haha.

Omg I'm in love with your stories! I'm into writing (and in real life) kinky stuff, and I'm now just finding these types of stories! I myself, am personally not into water sports, but I LOVE this and I think this is way too hot