January 17th, 2014 at 06:05am
This is literally amazing. I like the imagery here, and the almost inappropriately profound thought in such a short scene. The bland curiosity, the lethargic feel of the main character, it's dramatic in a really quiet way.
- She Went:
- Or perhaps her words were the worse of the two pollutants?
Sorry for sucking at comments, but I'll always admire anyone who can write drama without going all "OMG SHE CHEATED WUT DO I DOOOO" on me, since I'd probably vomit.
Shhhhh you don't suck at comments. I am ecstatic about all comments. I'm just happy to know anyone likes what I write.
I'm so glad you liked the chapter. :D
Oh god. My dramatic writing is always super messed up, perverse, and full of the filthiness of the world, but I generally try to not involve any type of romantic relationshipp or anything like that unless it absolutely makes sense.
And I have the Tumblr complaints to prove it...