Do You Catch Your Breath When I Look at You? - Comments

you have to update this soon pleaaassseee i love it

I'm mad at Jack for being a dick, but it was still insanely cute that he "saved" Alex

i may or may not be crying. omg

ow ow ow ow ow ow ow ow owwwwww ALEX NOOOOO

i was really scared he was going to cut and then he took the pills and fuck alex no

everything hurts

;((((

this was really cute yes yayy

oh my fucking god this is the cutest fucking thing i've ever read oh my god

I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH OH GOD IM EXCITED

ooooooh, I love this

FucK I KNEW I HAD A GOOD FEELING ABOUT THIS CHAPTER WHEN ALEX GIGGLED AND JACK WAS LIKE THAYS THE CUTEST THING IVE EVER HEARD MY
HEAT FLUTtERED AND YOU MADE ME FUCKING GIGGLE THIS IS MY FABORITE CHAPTER SO FAR IM SO EXCITED I HOPE THEY GET TOGETHER SOON GOD DMMIT

A H H H H YES ITS ALL HAPPENING ((hopefully))

Shit this is really good. I like that you didnt make lisa a total bitch.

yay omfg i really really love lisa in this story haha yay i'm excited for the next update(:

this is sooooOooOoooo good wow

This is really good. My jaw dropped and I nearly had a heart attack when he called out Jacks name lol.

Hahah nice excuse there, Alex(;

Alex bottom! Haha I literally gasped when he called her Jack I was like "damn you got caught!" Hahaha agh this is good! ♥

i love it! omg i laughed so hard though when he called her Jack. i feel like they would be interchangeable.