The Boy With The Thorn In His Side - Comments

Holy crap Naomi and Pete keep popping out kids but damn lewy really needs to vent to someone

This is amazing. I have to get on my computer to properly praise this. Hold on.

Poor lewy but I'm really digging this so far

@ Marker1570
It's cool, you don't have to if you don't want to. I'm just taking the idea I had and running with it, I appreciate your honesty

To be honest, I like the idea and I think it works well as a story but I don't like it as this story. I definitely did not want it to turn out like this and I don't think it fits with the characters. I'm sorry. I don't know if I want to read it or not :/

I love this so far. I love the friendshio between Jasmine and Lewy, and I love Andy's interaction with her. I cant wait to see Pete and all of the others

oh my god, another son!! jeez, i wonder how that went down! i love jasmine as the radical hippie chick and i looove where you're going with lewy! seems i was mistaken about him and jasmine...i'm excited to see how they both cope with their respective pasts; i almost forgot jasmine went through something equally fucked up as lewy.

i can't wait to see what else you reveal as this story progresses!

I'M SO EXCITED FOR THIS

I'm honestly so excited or this. I can't wait to see who Lew grows up to be.