Bite the Bullet - Comments

I'm letting you know this rn. This is great. I saw this was updated and read it for the first time and I love it. Don't doubt yourself pal. I honestly love where this was going. Keep it up :')

This is good, you should totally continue! :)

This is good, you should totally continue! :)

I need more of this please

Keep writing please :)

Keep writing please :)

yes, keep writing this please!

Yay an update! I like sadistic Alex in this! Makes him very interesting, and I hope Jack can handle him later! Keep up the good work!

@ Wave789
Well thank you so much for starters and there will be more up tomorrow

I really like this i need more of it :) its really interesting and i want to see how they'll work things out

Love this chapter!!!

You could continue with Jack and Brenna. Let them get to know each other and Alex will be on a down low for a while i guess. After a while Alex and Jack get to know each other at Brennas party or something and Alex just stalks Jack and stuff. I dont know sorry. Update?

I love it! Please update

I love it! Please update

If you need help, one of the things I do is I make a chapter time line like:

Chapter 1- jack meets alex. Alex and his friends push jack.

Chapter 2- jack gets his face slammed into a locker. Jack meets brenna.

Chapter 3- blah blah blah and so on

@ Baha

@ reckless-lullabies
Thank you guys. I'll keep writing this one. I'm workin on the second chapter right now

@ Baha

@ reckless-lullabies
Thank you guys. I'll keep writing this one. I'm workin on the second chapter right now

Dont delete this!!!!!! This is really good, and i have high standards for my fanfiction! High school is a common subject and people usually make it all generic where the popular guy hides his love for the unpopular one.. Idk this is unique .3. And i really like it ^.^

no don't hun! give it a shot and write some more before you decide to delete it. I like the beginning of this so far. :)