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  • Taya.mjpg

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    I'm letting you know this rn. This is great. I saw this was updated and read it for the first time and I love it. Don't doubt yourself pal. I honestly love where this was going. Keep it up :')
    August 10th, 2016 at 10:23pm
  • Dreamuser

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    This is good, you should totally continue! :)
    April 5th, 2015 at 03:39pm
  • Dreamuser

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    This is good, you should totally continue! :)
    April 5th, 2015 at 03:38pm
  • runningfromjalex

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    I need more of this please
    February 27th, 2015 at 12:11am
  • antisocial_kinsey6

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    Keep writing please :)
    February 24th, 2015 at 05:44pm
  • antisocial_kinsey6

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    Keep writing please :)
    February 24th, 2015 at 05:43pm
  • howtobepoppunk

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    yes, keep writing this please!
    February 23rd, 2015 at 10:46pm
  • NephthysPhoenix

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    Yay an update! I like sadistic Alex in this! Makes him very interesting, and I hope Jack can handle him later! Keep up the good work!
    August 20th, 2014 at 12:23am
  • MandiCX

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    @ Wave789
    Well thank you so much for starters and there will be more up tomorrow
    July 25th, 2014 at 05:46am
  • Wave789

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    I really like this i need more of it :) its really interesting and i want to see how they'll work things out Very Happy
    July 25th, 2014 at 05:38am
  • antisocial_kinsey6

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    Love this chapter!!!
    June 23rd, 2014 at 06:16am
  • Alltime_Jalexxxxx

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    You could continue with Jack and Brenna. Let them get to know each other and Alex will be on a down low for a while i guess. After a while Alex and Jack get to know each other at Brennas party or something and Alex just stalks Jack and stuff. I dont know sorry. Update?
    May 5th, 2014 at 02:23am
  • B-an_d l0ver!

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    I love it! Please update
    February 16th, 2014 at 07:49pm
  • B-an_d l0ver!

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    I love it! Please update
    February 16th, 2014 at 07:44pm
  • MusicMonster17

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    If you need help, one of the things I do is I make a chapter time line like:

    Chapter 1- jack meets alex. Alex and his friends push jack.

    Chapter 2- jack gets his face slammed into a locker. Jack meets brenna.

    Chapter 3- blah blah blah and so on
    January 21st, 2014 at 11:00pm
  • MandiCX

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    Thank you guys. I'll keep writing this one. I'm workin on the second chapter right now
    January 8th, 2014 at 12:29am
  • MandiCX

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    Thank you guys. I'll keep writing this one. I'm workin on the second chapter right now
    January 8th, 2014 at 12:28am
  • Baha

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    Dont delete this!!!!!! This is really good, and i have high standards for my fanfiction! High school is a common subject and people usually make it all generic where the popular guy hides his love for the unpopular one.. Idk this is unique .3. And i really like it ^.^
    January 8th, 2014 at 12:16am
  • reckless-lullabies

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    no don't hun! give it a shot and write some more before you decide to delete it. I like the beginning of this so far. :)
    January 7th, 2014 at 09:50pm