I'm letting you know this rn. This is great. I saw this was updated and read it for the first time and I love it. Don't doubt yourself pal. I honestly love where this was going. Keep it up :')
You could continue with Jack and Brenna. Let them get to know each other and Alex will be on a down low for a while i guess. After a while Alex and Jack get to know each other at Brennas party or something and Alex just stalks Jack and stuff. I dont know sorry. Update?
Dont delete this!!!!!! This is really good, and i have high standards for my fanfiction! High school is a common subject and people usually make it all generic where the popular guy hides his love for the unpopular one.. Idk this is unique .3. And i really like it ^.^