Deep in My Veins - Comments

@ NikkiFoxy8
I'll use it. You're welcome and I'll try!!!

Hey! I just came up with another idea, and it is totally up to you if you want to use it. For the next chapter, the chapter could be a little bit longer and it would be where Matt and Vivian make love celebrating their engagement, and while Vivian is sleeping, Matt is still awake and he has a flashback to when he finds out that Valary is using him and the other guys, and when they confront her, she admits that she was using them and acts like she loves them but they don't believe her and they start killing her, and right before she dies, she lies and tells Matt she loves him, but he doesn't believe her and like you said before, he snaps her head off. When he comes out of the flashback, he sees how happy that he has Vivian and he loves her and he is excited to marry her! You can use this if you want to, I just don't want you to over work yourself and you should take your time and don't rush. Let me know what you think! Thank you! Update soon!

@ NikkiFoxy8
Next chapter Jesse's gonna ask around middle is smut between Matt and Vivian last part he meets Tobias. You're welcome!

Thank you so much! The engagement party was exactly how I imagined it would be! It was really beautiful! That was awesome! I really have to know what Jesse is going to do now that he knows they are vampires so he can save Vivian! Is he going to meet Tobias next? After the party, Matt and Vivian should celebrate their engagement in their own sexy way! Thank you again! Update soon!

Thank you so much! The engagement party was exactly how I imagined it would be! It was really beautiful! That was awesome! I really have to know what Jesse is going to do now that he knows they are vampires so he can save Vivian! Is he going to meet Tobias next? After the party, Matt and Vivian should celebrate their engagement in their own sexy way! Thank you again! Update soon!

@ NikkiFoxy8
Yes the engagement party will be the next chapter

@ NikkiFoxy8
Those eyes and voice...

Will the next chapter be the engagement party? When Vivian says yes, Jesse should be hurt that she is marrying someone else, but when they have dinner, he could see their fangs or see them feeding on someone after Matt proposes! Let me know what you think! Thank you!

He could be young and you could use Freddy Rodriguez! He looks like he would be a vampire hunter! :)

@ NikkiFoxy8
Depends you want him young, mid age, or old? I was thinking Paul Walker or Freddy Rodriguez

@ weirdogirl1236
I love it! Who do you think should play him?

@ NikkiFoxy8
You're welcome! Still thinking of how/when to introduce the hunter. How you like the name Tobias for him?

Thank you! When Matt and Vivian celebrate their engagement with the guys, Jesse is going to be freaked when he finds out what Matt did to her! That was so cool seeing Vivian have some questions about her behavior! What could happen is when Matt proposes to her, Vivian is very happy she is going to marry Matt and she says yes when he promises to never hurt her like Jesse did! Thank you again! Update soon!

Update soon!

@ NikkiFoxy8
He'll find out soon and you're welcome!

Thank you so much! I really love that they had sex in the woods while Jesse was watching! Is Matt going to propose in the next chapter and Jesse finds out their secret while they celebrate? I really love the new chapter! Thank you again! Update soon!

Please update soon!

@ weirdogirl1236
Thank you!

@ NikkiFoxy8
I'll use it

I had another idea where Matt gives her an engagement ring and she accepts his proposal, and while Matt and Vivian and the guys are celebrating with glasses of blood or they are all feeding on someone, Jesse is spying them and finds out their secret! This just came to me off the top of my head, you can use if you want! Let me know what you think! Thank you again!