Tiny pearl-white bones snapped in twenty splinters of jarring pain, fragile ribcage cracked into a mess of curled ruby-glossed sticks cutting rosy flesh and ripping up lungs into glistening slices, skull crushed to a sludgy mass held together by porcelain skin.
This is the first piece I read on here in months. And it just happens to be a drabble, right? Well it's an amazing drabble. The part I quoted is out of this world. I'm completely in love.
I know this comment sucks, but there's nothing I can say about this piece other that it makes perfect sense even when it speaks about nonsense. And now I'm not making any sense AT ALL.
This is the first piece I read on here in months. And it just happens to be a drabble, right? Well it's an amazing drabble. The part I quoted is out of this world. I'm completely in love.
I know this comment sucks, but there's nothing I can say about this piece other that it makes perfect sense even when it speaks about nonsense. And now I'm not making any sense AT ALL.
Great job, all in all. xD