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  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ NatalieMCR

    Hey! Thank you sooooo much! It is the end but it's just the end of the story. I hope to talk to you again on my future work :3

    thank you for reading untill the very end of the story :D
    May 8th, 2014 at 11:14pm
  • NatalieMCR

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    "Warning: Chapter full of passionate sex." I love you.

    God I love how your writing is so detailed!

    OOOOOOHH this is the end??? DAMN!
    This was so full of feelings and I loved it a lot and the plot you started it with was seriously so amazing. You have mad skils!
    May 8th, 2014 at 11:02pm
  • NatalieMCR

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    aaaaaaaah I'm so excited!!! They're going to put Frank's life together again!! Can't wait for this ♥
    April 5th, 2014 at 05:18pm
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ NatalieMCR

    Omg, knowing I helped made me feel so good! I'm so so glad you liked it and good luck with your friend I hope it goes well :D Thanks :)
    March 17th, 2014 at 09:07pm
  • NatalieMCR

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    aaaagghhh so cuuute and fluffy the kissing part was awesome and the conversation was too, Frank is me and I am him!
    I loved it this gave me hope for when I tell my best friend I love him !!
    March 17th, 2014 at 08:58pm
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ ShotToRemember

    Yay! Thanks :D *blushes*
    March 17th, 2014 at 04:57pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    I loved the conversation and I loved the kissing! yes! that's exactly how it should have gone down<3

    you're amazing:)
    March 16th, 2014 at 11:48pm
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ NatalieMCR

    Heck, I'm flattered!! Thanksssss :D
    March 11th, 2014 at 07:05am
  • NatalieMCR

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    GENIUS- That's what you are! HOLY FRICK this is awesome!
    March 11th, 2014 at 02:25am
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ ShotToRemember

    Hahaha OMG sorry for leaving it there XD
    I'm glad I managed to explain it :3 and so happy you liked it :D
    March 9th, 2014 at 08:36am
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    @ X_WantedCriminal_X
    oh, that actually makes total sense! especially now with the "it" thing, the post office exploding. it would totally make sense that the destruction of his imagination would manifest itself in the way he sees (saw) destruction most powerfully. so way to go with that, it's kinda pure fucking genius.

    and also-- fuck you for leaving it THERE of all places!! *cries* I neeeed fwankie to tell gewawd how he feewlsDX
    March 9th, 2014 at 01:58am
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    Aweee!! thanks so much!!! :3

    Oh and that explosion thingy.... uhmm I kind of meant those screams in a way that Frank is actually the one killing even though he's the one being choked. It's probably natural you're confused about that. Presumably, you have figured out that his bf is kinda like the symbol of his imaginary world and I just thought that if Frank is actually fighting off his imagination to reach Gerard, it should hurt him because he's fighting him off in a way too? Like, Frank is being choked but even when he's being choked he's fighting really hard to get out of his mind that it hurts him. And those explosions and shattering sounds were supposed to stand for his imagination shattering and shutting off... I just couldn't manage to make it that way... sorry.... I dont know if I managed to explain this but... let me know if I couldn't.
    March 2nd, 2014 at 08:54pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    ohh this is by far my favorite chapter yetO.o there was so much emotion and frank knows he loves Gerard and Gerard (ahem clearly) loves Frankie too and eruugghhh I need the next chapter because I need to see frank telling Gerard how he really feels^.^ I love this story so much..
    I'm really curious about the explosion though, and why his imaginary boyfriend was screaming in pain? not sure what that was haha

    anyhow please update SoON!!<3 you're such a good writer
    March 2nd, 2014 at 04:34pm
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    Thanks for commenting! :3 I know right, poor frankie :( he has gerard though :D
    February 20th, 2014 at 01:12pm
  • ShotToRemember

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    Frank and Gerard are solo adorable:) but poor frankie i hate that he's still having these stupid imaginary things ughh poor guy:((
    February 20th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • ShotToRemember

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    poor gerard:(
    February 12th, 2014 at 02:34pm
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ ShotToRemember
    Aww thanks. I'm so glad you liked it <3
    February 3rd, 2014 at 10:38am
  • ShotToRemember

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    Still love this. Don't lose hope just because people aren't commenting--hardly anyone comments on frerards anywhere anymore.. Sadly...

    Anyways, I can't wait for the next update. Poor Frankie. I love the rawness you gave to the scene. Especially with the sunlight bathing gerard. Just adding lighting like that set the perfect scene for pure emotion.
    February 3rd, 2014 at 07:27am
  • X_WantedCriminal_X

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    @ ShotToRemember
    Thank you for letting me know what you think.
    Will try to update as fast as I can.

    P.S. He won't be out of that confusion for a long time ;)
    January 19th, 2014 at 09:27am
  • ShotToRemember

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    aww yay an update! poor Frankie, he's so confused and if I were in his situation, I would be too.. thank goodness he has Gerard to be at his side and help him along! Gerard seems so sweet ugh I need more! pls update again soon??
    January 19th, 2014 at 07:49am