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  • Eren Jaeger

    Eren Jaeger (100)

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    @herobrine.
    Don't worry, you didn't miss it! I'm trying so hard to make everything flow at a good pace and NOT spoil it by revealing too quickly, which is a bad habit of mine.

    I'm glad you like the P.O.V. changes! :D I was worried that choosing to do that would lose people, but I felt it would work best. Is it bad that a lot of the feels/descriptions were ones I perceived when watching the changes that happen to Booker after he consumes vigors?
    January 17th, 2014 at 06:10am
  • archivist

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    Ok so comment #2
    - This reminds me a little of Brave New World by Aldous Huxley. I love, love, love the idea of a human subject under experimentation, and I'm totally curious as to what the experiments are. Excuse me please if I missed it, I'm a fast reader

    I like how the point-of-view changes, from the girl to Dr. Hanes, and the imagery of the fire, its heat, its ravaging hunger, it's all beautiful. The fire scene was vaguely BS:I with the arm-raising and the all-consuming fire.
    January 17th, 2014 at 06:04am
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    I happen to love BioShock Infinite and space both dearly so you just earned a rec and a sub.
    January 10th, 2014 at 06:07am
  • Eren Jaeger

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    @herobrine
    THAT COMMENT. I'M SMILING SO MUCH. :D
    I'm happy I could make your day. c:
    January 10th, 2014 at 05:35am
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    THE BIOSHOCK QUOTE AND THE SPACE BACKGROUND
    DAY = MADE
    January 10th, 2014 at 05:34am