January 14th, 2014 at 07:42am
This is such a great drabble. The monster was described so well and I really felt sympathetic come the end of the piece. Great job!
I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine
I also like how you tied in the setting of this story. While it may have been your intention (or it may not have been), I liked how it correlated with high school and the narrator's last taste of "freedom." I felt like it added a whole other element to this little drabble, with maybe even a hint of symbolism? Regardless, very well done indeed.