Under the Collar - Comments

So, it's been a while since I've read anything that you've written, so I might be a little rusty, but I'll give it a good shot. Knowing you, it's going to be amazing, even before I've started reading!

First off- Brian + Matt + Lingere= one very happy ZV;.

I love the description at the very beginning, setting the scene with some beautiful imagery that always gets me into the story. You paint pictures in my head with your word choices, and that's not something many writers can do as well as you can.

You get this feeling of trepidation at the line 'Would he appreciate all that Brian had done' almost as though you're hinting that something might go wrong- and all that makes me want to do is keep reading!

God, Brian is such a good boyfriend in this- he needs to teach a class or something.

Sexytimes, as always, A+! As someone who hasn't written Slash smut in a very long time, it's always good to see people carrying the torch of awesomeness and writing amazing stuff like this. Particularly as I'm not seeing as much Bratt as I used to, which is sad :(

All in all, I really loved this story. The sex, the story leading up to it- in particular the dialogue between Matt and Brian was so natural that you could imagine them having those conversations right in front of you!

I think this has been one of my favourite stories so far- you've ticked all the boxes! Well done :)

That was sexy!

Brian in lingerie...not much more needs to be said haha so hot!!! Good luck in the contest!!

oh damnnn that was hot

@ rachthebat.
"That was unexpected.. but I dig it!" XD

@ Synful Cocktail
I'm the same, I'm reading and I'm like "Ohh, okay, I like that!" XD

@ rachthebat.
I don't think I have a lot, but, when I read stories and that, I figure out I have a lot more than I originally think haha

@ Synful Cocktail
Mwahaha, I most certainly do!

@ rachthebat.
As you know mine ahahaha.

@ Synful Cocktail
Pretty sure you know all my weaknesses hahaha

You're welcome, honey!

@ rachthebat.
I'm glad I could stun you into silence. Hahaha!

*sassily flips hair* I know all your weaknesses, or at least, most of them. And, I'll continue to use them against you! Thank you!

Thanks, again... you too!

I...umm..what?

I'm sorry, Rachel can't come to the comment box right now, she's swooned so hard, she's fallen over!

I think I've died and gone to Bratt heaven! YOU MADE BRIAN RIDE MATT, YOU KNOW MY WEAKNESS, DAMN YOU! XD I loved it! I loved the hints of sass from Brian, the choice of underwear (another of my weaknesses), the colour! My favourite! :D Man, this was wonderful!

Good luck in the contest!