February 28th, 2014 at 07:36pm
Under the Collar - Comments
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That was sexy!February 22nd, 2014 at 10:04am
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Brian in lingerie...not much more needs to be said haha so hot!!! Good luck in the contest!!January 23rd, 2014 at 10:42pm
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oh damnnn that was hotJanuary 23rd, 2014 at 07:25pm
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@ rachthebat.
"That was unexpected.. but I dig it!" XDJanuary 23rd, 2014 at 07:32am -
@ Synful Cocktail
I'm the same, I'm reading and I'm like "Ohh, okay, I like that!" XDJanuary 23rd, 2014 at 07:23am -
@ rachthebat.
I don't think I have a lot, but, when I read stories and that, I figure out I have a lot more than I originally think hahaJanuary 23rd, 2014 at 07:21am -
@ Synful Cocktail
Mwahaha, I most certainly do!January 23rd, 2014 at 07:16am -
@ rachthebat.
As you know mine ahahaha.
January 23rd, 2014 at 07:15am -
@ Synful Cocktail
Pretty sure you know all my weaknesses hahaha
You're welcome, honey!January 23rd, 2014 at 07:11am -
@ rachthebat.
I'm glad I could stun you into silence. Hahaha!
*sassily flips hair* I know all your weaknesses, or at least, most of them. And, I'll continue to use them against you! Thank you!
Thanks, again... you too!January 23rd, 2014 at 07:04am -
I...umm..what?
I'm sorry, Rachel can't come to the comment box right now, she's swooned so hard, she's fallen over!
I think I've died and gone to Bratt heaven! YOU MADE BRIAN RIDE MATT, YOU KNOW MY WEAKNESS, DAMN YOU! XD I loved it! I loved the hints of sass from Brian, the choice of underwear (another of my weaknesses), the colour! My favourite! :D Man, this was wonderful!
Good luck in the contest!January 23rd, 2014 at 07:02am
First off- Brian + Matt + Lingere= one very happy ZV;.
I love the description at the very beginning, setting the scene with some beautiful imagery that always gets me into the story. You paint pictures in my head with your word choices, and that's not something many writers can do as well as you can.
You get this feeling of trepidation at the line 'Would he appreciate all that Brian had done' almost as though you're hinting that something might go wrong- and all that makes me want to do is keep reading!
God, Brian is such a good boyfriend in this- he needs to teach a class or something.
Sexytimes, as always, A+! As someone who hasn't written Slash smut in a very long time, it's always good to see people carrying the torch of awesomeness and writing amazing stuff like this. Particularly as I'm not seeing as much Bratt as I used to, which is sad :(
All in all, I really loved this story. The sex, the story leading up to it- in particular the dialogue between Matt and Brian was so natural that you could imagine them having those conversations right in front of you!
I think this has been one of my favourite stories so far- you've ticked all the boxes! Well done :)