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    @ NicVivHow
    yw :) keep updating awesome person
    April 11th, 2014 at 08:46am
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    @ IWillMakeYouScream
    Thank you!!
    April 11th, 2014 at 06:59am
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    Yay!!!!! You're awesome
    April 10th, 2014 at 09:51pm
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    Hey, I hope you update soon :D
    March 7th, 2014 at 07:47am
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    UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE
    March 1st, 2014 at 11:32pm
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    @ NicVivHow
    So I guess I will try my hand at a Draco Malfoy story myself. This chapter was fantastic! I'm so happy they got together! I love this. Is this the end will their be another chapter? I am so surprised that Lucious was so gracious! I love Narcissa! Great chapter! :3
    February 23rd, 2014 at 06:41pm
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    Greetings @musicismagic !
    I'm glad you like my story, and thank you for the feedback / comment!
    February 19th, 2014 at 12:08pm
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    Hey,
    I just found your story the other day :3 I couldn't stop reading! I adore this story. I too hope they end up together, but it is your choice :) I can hardly wait for tthe next chapter!
    February 19th, 2014 at 01:34am
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    Haha thank you heaps @DeficientlyObscure, for your feedback!
    I'm glad you liked the chapter, I rather enjoyed writing it, although the next one will be the best one yet I think, no matter which way I take it!
    I hope you try a Draco story, I've love to read it!
    February 16th, 2014 at 09:43am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    Oh dear sweet baby Jesus, I have so many opinions and I kind of want you to write it how you originally intended but at the same time I want them to get back together and be happy. Oh decisions, decisions. I really liked this chapter imparticular, the main reason is because of the way Narcissa and Hermione get along so well. I also liked the part with the guy from the ministry and how he made a move on Hermione! That was priceless, but back to what you asked, hmmm I know this is probably a little selfish of me but could you write it both way? Because I want to see the original way you planned it which I don't know how that is, but if it doesn't include them ending up together I feel I would be slightly disappointed because of all the hard work Hermione put into trying to get back to Malfoy. But really however you choose will be fine with me, I always check for this story whenever I log on. I'm thinking of trying my own hand at a Malfoy story now, but I'm not sure yet. Anyways I look forward to hearing from you and seeing what will happen next!
    February 16th, 2014 at 08:46am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    Oh god I love Narcissa! I can't wait for the dinner I'm so excited! Don't feel bad life gets in everyone's way sometimes! Can't wait for your next update!
    February 10th, 2014 at 05:15am
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    I can't wait for your next update!
    February 5th, 2014 at 06:00am
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    Oh dear lord that is a cliffhanger, I. Curious about Narcissa because I feel like in a way she would approve of Hermione because she wants her son to be happy. I am hanging on the edge of my seat I can't wait to see what is next to come! Oh I like how Malfoy keeps saying that he is not good enough for Hermione it shows a true change in his character.
    January 29th, 2014 at 03:55am
  • NicVivHow

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    Thankyou! I've done my best to keep the characters true to how J.K wrote them as in the books, but I felt Luna needed to be a little more ... less vague and airy fairy for this chapter.
    January 28th, 2014 at 10:16am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    So I'm excited for the next chapter, I like how Luna is encouraging Hermione to think outside the box about what happened with Draco, threat you portray Luna is different than in most stories and I enjoy the change. I feel special that I got to read two chapters in one day and that I was able to comprehend them considering I was up for like 48 hours. I am overly excited to see what will happen now, so many possibilities.
    January 28th, 2014 at 08:58am
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    I'm super excited! I can't wait to read it, I love giving feedback I'm working on a story of my own but I've had some serious writers block and now that I'm reading again I'm starting to feel creative again.
    January 27th, 2014 at 12:43pm
  • NicVivHow

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    Glad you like it!! I love receiving your comments and feedback, it's awesome to know what I've done right and wrong!
    Next chapter should be up soon ... I'm 3/4 of the way through it already!
    January 27th, 2014 at 12:26pm
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    Hmmm I absolutely love Ron in this chapter! So sweet and the subtle hints of his and Luna's affection towards each other is growing I'm so intrigued I'm gonna be hanging on the edge of my seat till the next chapter, to see where this is all going! I like how Hermione has no feelings other than friendship towards Ron and it's not a horrid love triangle between an ex and her new interest. I'm curious if Draco is going to find out what his Gryffindor Princess has been doing since he suddenly dumped her. So many question but anyways fantastic chapter I'm obviously looking forward to the next one. :)
    January 27th, 2014 at 12:16pm
  • NicVivHow

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    Thanks for the feedback - I'm glad my plot twist worked and took you by surprise! Kicking I've done my job!
    January 23rd, 2014 at 11:10am
  • DeficientlyObscure

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    Poor Hermione!!! As much as I love Draco I kind of want to punch him in the face. I hope he comes back to his senses, Hermione doesn't deserve better she deserves him. I was not expecting that to happen I was incredulous at first, just couldn't believe it happened but I am glad it did, it gives a new depth and twist. I can't wait for the next chapter!
    January 22nd, 2014 at 06:39pm