Hi! I'm from the 'Prompt Me Away with A7X' Contest and I'm here to judge your story!
I really enjoyed this story, and the back story that was provided halfway through as well. Bar a few grammatical errors and switching between tenses, which can normally be changed with a quick one-over of the story just to smooth it out, it was very well written.
Even though Matt is a little bit of an asshat in this, I like that his character develops. Plus, having Brian just be so cool with sucking his dick is always a plus- very hot. Well done on such an awesome one-shot, and thank you so much for entering my contest!
I really enjoyed this story, and the back story that was provided halfway through as well. Bar a few grammatical errors and switching between tenses, which can normally be changed with a quick one-over of the story just to smooth it out, it was very well written.
Even though Matt is a little bit of an asshat in this, I like that his character develops. Plus, having Brian just be so cool with sucking his dick is always a plus- very hot. Well done on such an awesome one-shot, and thank you so much for entering my contest!