Amnesiphobia - Comments

I really enjoyed this story, my favorite part being where the significant other is telling the narrator how they refuse to let them forget about them or anything. It just really got to me. There's a lot of feeling in such a short post and is one of my favorite types of stories to read.

I really like the first line of this! It's gripping and powerful right from the get-go. It hooked me in and made me read on so in terms of excellent first lines, it definitely ranks up there with some of the best that I've read! You follow that with this wonderful mix of short, snappy sentences and wonderfully descriptive sentences that just works really well together. It adds to the overal anxiety of the piece and that fear is so clearly represented throughout the words that like shadow.angel said, it makes me a little anxious myself about losing my memory. I've always been a little scared of losing my mind so this kind of confirms that and made me freak out a little, which is a good thing because it means that your writing did that, impressive!

I honestly couldn't see anything to fault about this. It has this chilling aspect to it, and you've written it so wonderfully. Amazing job!

This is rather terrifying You've really made me anxious about amnesia, which is really great that you could do that with so little words. But there was a touch of hope at the end, which I really liked. Great job!

I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine

I only hope that if I ever have amnesiphobia, that someone will be by my side too. Way to make me scared.

I think this is my favorite one in this series. I love how the main character uses the love to help him(?) get through his fear daily. It's so sweet <3