Coconut - Comments

ARE YOU A PROFESSIONAL WRITER IN DISGUISE??

YOU ARE SUCH a talented writer, I am so beyond the moon happy for you ^_^ You've been blessed with a true gift dear :)

God Bless!

Have the loveliest night ever

xoxo

I really fucking love this! You're an amazing writer; please keep up the good work! ^w^

EHH?!?!

You guys are so amazing! I've never thought I would get so far. I'm so amazingly happy, and grateful!

This is such a beautiful drabble with perfect descriptions. I adore the way you have written the romance and the coconut scent. Well done!

I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine

I'm here as a judge for the Magazine contest!

I really like how you start this. It brings the reader right into the conversation and instantly made me wonder who the narrator is talking about. You then go further and use wonderful description to paint this lovely image in my head. Like kim wonshik. said, it completely melts my heart. It seems like the picture-perfect relationship from the outset and although you go on to say they aren't a pair any more, it still gives the air of that person being important. Whoever they were, they made a serious impact on the narrator and I think's a really lovely way to approach this. Your description and imagery really add to this piece and make it amazing, I'm quite envious of your beautiful writing style! All in all, I love this piece. No grammar or spelling niggles and the last line packs a definite impact and changes the view of the entire piece. Great job!

Oh my GOSH this took my breath away! You wrote this so beautifully that it was just perfect in every way. I loved the way you described it all. In the beginning, how you wrote about his eyelashes touching her cheek as he went in for a kiss, that melted my heart. That alone could allow me to really feel and understand the amount of intense passion between the pair! The way you write is just so entrancing and it makes me envious that I can't have/haven't found a relationship like that. Like, that's ideal and I want someone to make me feel like you just made me feel. The ending is superb and I just love this to bits. It definitely deserves a rec. Great job!

I am so glad I read this piece... You are brilliant with words, this felt like poetry :)

Just wow! From what I've just read, I think that you are great with playing with words and know very well how to put them in right places. This text was light and easy to read, but at the same time gripping and exciting. And the layout just suits it perfectly. Well done!