The House on the Hill - Comments

  • A. J.

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    great job. you expressed so much without the use of that one letter. funny how much we rely on vowels. lol
    March 1st, 2014 at 09:36pm
  • Queen of the Clouds

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    I can't even begin to imagine not using a letter in a drabble, but you have pulled this off so brilliantly. The flow isn't affected by it, and I can easily see what you are describing. Good job!

    I love this drabble so much that I'm going to feature it in my drabble column in the Mibba Magazine Cute
    January 30th, 2014 at 11:45pm
  • kili the dwarf

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    Very unique, I liked this and nice little challenge there to not use 'a'
    January 20th, 2014 at 01:46am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    This was fantastic! I can't come up with an entire sentence without using the letter 'a', let alone an entire drabble! Which was also extremely well written. I was shocked at how perfect your flow was, given you had limited word choice! This was such a unique idea and theme, and I'm so glad I had the chance to read this!

    God Bless

    xoxo
    January 20th, 2014 at 01:33am
  • Writer in the Rye

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    This was fantastic! I can't come up with an entire sentence without using the letter 'a', let alone an entire drabble! Which was also extremely well written. I was shocked at how perfect your flow was, given you had limited word choice! This was such a unique idea and theme, and I'm so glad I had the chance to read this!

    God Bless

    xoxo
    January 20th, 2014 at 01:33am