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I really love this.

I am so addicted to your story, I really am.

I love your layout, and the uncertainty of the narrator, once again a flawless update!

I am so glad, and I hope you don't mind me commenting so much, I try to reign it in but you always have that one line where I lose it and I fall in love with your story all over again :)

@ Writer in the Rye
You are doing wonders for my ego darling. I'm really glad you're liking it because I love writing this.

I finally got to reading all the updates! and GOODNESS, you keep on killing me with your beautiful writing!!
And I am literally squirming to know more about this last picture and the apologies...though my head is already making wild guesses...

I love the updates! please keep writing!!

If this doesn't get published one day I'm not reading anything ever again

Thank you for the beautiful update, the last lines of your chapters kill me because it's pure genius; it gets down so deep!

God bless!

Xoxo

I love the mystery of it. We dont know the names of the girl or the narrator. It makes me feel like it could be myself. There is love, passion and sadness behind this story. But I cant help but continue to read this. I like how you describe it as she was looking for a book or story were she could be the heroine and that makes me believe the words the narrator is writing is her book. You dont even understand how much this means to me to read this love story. It makes me feel li me I can finally live up to none with out all the pressure of ever single other one with a perfect/no problem happily ever after. Your story is realistic and I love it so much. Please update again soon
Love, Julia

Can't wait for an update :) The way you describe things is so quaint, so eloquent. It's a very refreshing read!

Can't wait for an update :) The way you describe things is so quaint, so eloquent. It's a very refreshing read!

@ Writer in the Rye
You're smiling ear to ear? I'm smiling ear to ear. That is such a huge compliment thank you. I assure you I'm not a professional writer but I'm so glad you're enjoying it because I am having so much fun writing it. XxX

I've only a already read the first chapter and I'm convinced you're a professional writer going undercover on this site. My favorite thing about your style is the way you portray people - it's astounding. Your imagery has me smiling ear to ear and Nomally I would go on and on about what a lovely writer you are, except you've left me speechless.

Please just know you are an extremely blessed writer.

I subscribed of course :)

God bless

Xoxo

This is interesting and familiar crush behaviour and thoughts. Haha

Man...

I really love the journal/diary setting and feel of the way you tell this story. It's so personal and it is easy to feel as if I'm the one experiencing these emotions.

I find that I am really already starting to get attached to this story...it maybe because the way the narrator thought of a million scenarios of the meeting is something I would do. I can relate---I would probably self-induce anxiety and panic just thinking of the possibilities!!

A great update! Keep up the great work!

I recommended this when I read the first few sentences of the first chapter, and now I've read the second. I love the feel of this and the tone you take with it. Very good job.

@ rainbebez.tears.
Oh my goodness thank you soo much. I've not written like this before so it's so lovely to know that you're enjoying it.
You've put a right smile on my face. xxx

This is really beautiful.

I love that you don't know much about the narrator, but immediately what's striking is the fact that there is a clear and deep emotional connection to this Marley character. Clearly there is history and a sense of familiarity, but the readers don't know the whole story. The details are great---I could picture this scene in my head as I read! LOVED that.

The tone of the chapter nearly made my heart break. And I want to know more~!
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