February 18th, 2014 at 06:23pm
Nightfall - Comments
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I really like this but I feel like it isn't going anywhere. I am waiting for something interesting to happen or exciting and it hasn't happened yet. Keep writing! I do want to read more =)February 18th, 2014 at 03:32am
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I really like this but I feel like it isn't going anywhere. I am waiting for something interesting to happen or exciting and it hasn't happened yet. Keep writing! I do want to read more =)February 18th, 2014 at 03:31am
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@ Matthew Sanders;
Thank you so much!February 1st, 2014 at 02:43pm -
I really love this!January 31st, 2014 at 06:13pm
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Second chapter was great can't wait for the next!January 28th, 2014 at 12:46pm
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@ pbreyoung1996
Thank you so much!! I'll post the next chapter soon so please do!
January 26th, 2014 at 12:13pm -
I like this and I hope to be able to read more! Please post more =)January 26th, 2014 at 02:34am
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@ SaccharineLouie
You have a nice writing style its easy to read without wondering if things were left out im very excited for the next chapter!January 24th, 2014 at 03:09am -
@ litldevil928
Thank you so much! Really, thank you for taking the time to read and even subscribe.
January 23rd, 2014 at 03:29pm -
This sounds very interesting. The first chapter was well written I love a story with lots of detail. Ill deff be your first subscriber... can't wait for the next!January 23rd, 2014 at 11:51am
Hello! Thank you so much for your criticism, it has been one of my worries that the readers would feel this way. So far, I think I've been too caught up with setting the background and painting the picture for these characters that I haven't been speeding up on the story progression. Sorry about that. Will focus on that aspect in the future chapters, thank you!