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  • William Beckett

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    I adore your layout! It's very good. Your ratio of dialogue and description is at a good level, though perhaps having more of April would be good so we could visualise it better when she is with Travis? The character development with April is going along fine!
    May 10th, 2014 at 11:32am
  • ynggfvv48

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    I'm in love with this! Originality at it's finest!!
    March 3rd, 2014 at 12:13am
  • LyricsOfInsanity

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    THIS IS SO CUTE!
    February 8th, 2014 at 04:46am
  • what a sellout.

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    Congrats. You just earned my second comment ever on this site. This story is really great. I love the concept. Really good job! :]
    February 2nd, 2014 at 01:25am
  • YoungFavorite

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    I already love your stoty ! I cannot wait for the next chapter ! :)
    January 26th, 2014 at 01:30pm
  • italias

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    Love it already!
    January 26th, 2014 at 09:58am
  • EricaCarvalho

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    Awesome! Continue!! Smile
    January 24th, 2014 at 04:40am
  • skyesusan

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    love it! Smile
    January 24th, 2014 at 03:38am
  • TrinTrin

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    great start!!!!
    January 23rd, 2014 at 10:26am
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